Good descriptions and original concept. I really think that the title will need to change, you know networks, they’ll want something like “star girlz” or something. Constellations is probably too long and “technical” of a title. IMO.

While the animated pitch is great, and right to the point, that narrator dude is kinda boring, I mean anything can be improved on right, I’d add SFX and perhaps some voices of sorts. “Hi I’m Picey!” – but I dig it, sometimes not all the stars align to get stuff like that done.

Emma Graves, is also cool, production values are good, but I was 50 seconds in and was still having trouble figuring what it was all about. – Kick up the pacing! – get to the gravestone sequence alot quicker. Network folks are busy and need to be seduced immediatley. The quicker you grab them the better.

Voices seem a little muffled, scratch audio I gather, but good animation.

Just my two cents, what the hell do I know? – I still haven’t sold a show! )

that constellation pitch was animated so well! its was really great quality flash!

Steve
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